24 hours
Diagnosis
$147
- 8-section annotated teardown
- Rewritten hero, subhead, and primary CTA
- Ranked list of five fixes (impact vs effort)
- Delivered as a clean HTML/markdown brief you keep
Offer Page Rescue
Most offer pages hide the offer, bury the price, and ask for a click before they have earned it. Offer Page Rescue is a teardown of that page, and a replacement if you want one live. You work with Shawn Hall.
Prices are one-time. No retainer on this page.
The two things I sell
Same subject either way: the one URL that has to convert (or a written offer if you do not have a page yet). Not a marketing site. Not a brand refresh.
24 hours
$147
48 hours from complete intake
$397
What the $147 diagnosis actually is
Each diagnosis is a brief, not a slide deck. I quote the headline you are running today, say what it is doing, and write the replacement. The eight sections:
Scope
How it works
One page, or a written offer if there is no page yet. A short form: who it is for, the price, three proof points, where checkout or the waitlist should go. Incomplete intake does not start the clock.
The 8-section brief lands: annotated teardown, rewritten hero / subhead / CTA, ranked five fixes. You keep the file. That is the $147 job, done.
A one-pager goes up — static HTML you can host, or a Carrd/Framer-ready build — with full copy, mobile, and the waitlist or checkout link wired. One revision in the following 7 days.
Fit
Samples
Unsolicited analyses of live public pages. Not paid work. The brief you buy matches this format.
Hero dares you to earn a first dollar. The 10% + 50¢ fee is on another URL.
Open teardown → Sample 02Headline is a product catalog. The 0% take rate is a bullet under Scale.
Open teardown → Sample 03“The better way” — price and the Calendly contrast live in the FAQ.
Open teardown →FAQ
Diagnosis ships within 24 hours of a complete intake, not of payment alone. Ship the page ships within 48 hours of the same — intake filled, URL or written offer in, waitlist/checkout destination named. Weekends count. If I am going to miss the window I tell you before it closes, and I do not start jobs I cannot finish on the clock.
One round, inside 7 days of delivery. You mark up the staging page: copy, order, the CTA, the link. I do not reopen scope (new sections, a second page, a brand system). Diagnosis has no revision round; the brief is the deliverable. If a line in it is wrong as a matter of fact, I correct the fact.
Diagnosis: if the brief is not useful, say so within 7 days and I refund it. Ship the page: refund only if you reject the staging page after the one revision, and before any domain cutover. Once the page is on your domain, the job is accepted.
People with something to sell and a page (or a written offer) that is supposed to do the selling. Consultants, course operators, small software, independent practices. Not a fit if you need brand identity, a multi-page marketing site, ads, or SEO on retainer — those are different jobs, and I do not sell them here.
No. Diagnosis is a finished job. Ship the page is a separate job. You can buy the page without the diagnosis, or the diagnosis without the page. If you buy both, the diagnosis still comes first; the 48-hour clock for the page starts when intake is complete.
Shawn Hall. Offer Desk is a small studio. There is not a project manager in the middle, and there is not a team to introduce you to.
Start
After payment I send the intake. The clock starts when that form is complete. If you only have a written offer and no page, that is enough for the diagnosis.